Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Niva .....

Niva is a century and nine year old school. In 2009 - 2010,   it got accredited. When you walk into the hallway at 7:00 a.m, leading to the teacher's room, you find owls staring at you.When you enter the classroom it locks you in for a hour. The tables and chairs await you, they grab you when you sit down. As you walk by the kindergarten classes you hear and see kids screaming and playing, with full of enjoyment. As you come into the lunch room at lunch time, you smell such good fragrance as if it were right in front of your nose, you hear noises as if it were a fish market at its busiest time. As you walk by the classrooms, if you listen closely you can only hear teacher's lecturing and air cons roaring as it gives out air for its students.

Michelle Anchal Marjee

1 comment:

  1. Joanne's advice was really useful, as she stated she didn't really understand something, so I clarified it. I changed the order of my paragraph and corrected my spelling for accredited.

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